So…wow, I got some really nice reviews from our peers in the Coursera class.
When I clicked the link, I had two of the assessment paragraphs, shown below:
peer 2 → A beautiful collection of youtube videos on a google-docs presentation – well constructed story that is moving, addresses the concerns and hopes outlined in the course around the potential (both good and bad) of what technology brings us. Clearly the authors understands multiple elements of the course – weaving use of digital tech into a story that highlights key themes. The choice of the media was good – the one piece I would critique is the choice of background of the slides – which seemed in discord to the rest of the artefact. I was in tears throughout – it certainly stimulated a reaction. Good job.
peer 2 → Fabulous collection of videos woven through a google docs presentation. The background of the slides did not work well with the piece – but the author should not be penalized for that. Clearly, they fully understood the concepts of the course.